After a long, tiring journey at last we were closer to the future and closer than we thought. Suddenly we saw something we never saw before. There were 3 metal, hot air balloons stuck together with almost supersized car engines on top of them and strange orbs hanging from them.
Let's get on them, I said.
Are you sure? said Cade. They look dangerous.
Probably not, I said. They don't look that dangerous. They just look like regular balloons.
I think it's a good new way to travel, said Mace.
We got into the balloons. It was very cramped. The balloons quickly flew into the air. Unlike normal hot air balloons, these ones could move left to right. We drifted over a mangrove and soon drifted into the ocean. Whales dived in the water and Cade even spotted a pod of Orcas.
A New Way to TravelSuddenly a plane crashed into the balloons ...
I really like the way you have used the names of your friends for the characters in your story and it sounds like they are all heading for a great adventure!
ReplyDeleteNice work Nicolas. If you use ctrl-shift-v to paste your writing it will all fit inside the blog template.
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