Thursday, 5 August 2021

the present writing

kia orana Owairaka school Here is some writing I did called the present. I didn't exactly finish it but Proud of it anyway. Were you able to write the 100 word story with only 100 words or less? Blog you later

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  1. Hey nicolas Jiraiya here, wow it has been a long time. No I have not wrote a 100 word story. BUt here is a question witch class are you in and who is your teacher, also wich intermediate are you going to? blog ya later.

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  2. Hi Nicolas.
    I like your writing because you have used some awesome words.
    I just want to say could you have made your writing bigger? There a capital letter in the middle of the sentence. Are they mean't to be there?

    Blog Ya LATER!

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